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2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Teacher, I'm really sorry. I changed my phone and slipped having kept new phone in vibration mode, so I couldn't receive your call. This is today's topic for homework. : Experience is the best teacher in life. Did you have an experience that helped you avoid the same mistake that may be harmful in your life? The best teacher in my life was the math teacher I'd met in an educational institution to study one year more in order to enter the better university, 3 years ago . He was very competent in explaining difficult concepts easily so that I was able to learn mathematics easily than ever before, Following his curriculum and studying very hard, I could raise my math score until June rapidly. Even though I couldn't take the course no longer after June as the course was closed because of the lower register rate, he definitely gave me a confidence for the subject which I really hated and always tried to escape from. This is why the math teacher has left a great impression on me.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Cindy!
I though something happened to you a ready.

I haven\'t talked to you for a long time already.
How are you doing?

Well, I hope tomorrow, I would be able to talk to you.

See you!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Teacher, I\'m really sorry.

>>  correct!

I changed my phone and slipped having kept new phone in vibration mode, so I couldn\'t receive your call.
>>  I changed my phone and it slipped in my mind that I kept my new phone in vibration mode so I was not able to receive your call.
This is today\'s topic for homework.
: Experience is the best teacher in life. Did you have an experience that helped you avoid the same mistake that may be harmful in your life? 

The best teacher in my life was the math teacher I\'d met in an educational institution to study one year more in order to enter the better university, 3 years ago .

>>  The best teacher in my life was my math teacher I met 3 years ago,  in an educational institution where I have studied for a year.

He was very competent in explaining difficult concepts easily so that I was able to learn mathematics easily than ever before,

>>  He was very competent and he easily explains difficult concepts so I was able to learn Mathematics easier than before.

Following his curriculum and studying very hard, I could raise my math score until June rapidly.

>>  Following his curriculum, and by studying hard, I was able to raise my Math score rapidly until June.

Even though I couldn\'t take the course no longer after June as the course was closed because of the lower register rate, he definitely gave me a confidence for the subject which I really hated and always tried to escape from. 

>>  correct!
 This is why the math teacher has left a great impression on me.

>>  That is why my Math teacher left a great impression on me.

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