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2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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In most countries around the world operate on the basis of democracy. Except for some countries. When I was a kid, I learned that individuals freedom forms the basis of democracy. Besides, the root idea of democracy is respecting people. Like wise, to the development of the country gonna take the power of the people. And freedom of speech is guaranteed by the constituition. I can't live hard,if there is no freedom of speech to me

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Hi there once again my dear [이름], thank you so much for always keeping track of your homework...

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take care baby...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

In most countries around the world operate on the basis of democracy.

>>Most countries around the world observe Democracy.

 Except for some countries. 

>>correct
 When I was a kid, I learned that individuals freedom forms the basis of democracy. 

>>When I was a kid, I learned that individual\'s freedom forms the basis of democracy. 
 Besides, the root idea of democracy is respecting people.

>>correct
 Like wise, to the development of the country gonna take the power of the people.

>>Likewise, the development of a country may depend on the power of the people.
 And freedom of speech is guaranteed by the constituition.
>>correct

Observe the proper spelling of the word CONSTITUTION.
 I can\'t live hard,if there is no freedom of speech to me

>>correct

OR: I can\'t live well if there is no freedom of speech.

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