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Happy Friday Tom!
Good job with your essay. Keep on writing!
I do understand your situation.
I experienced that too.
I think those walls that you mentioned are a bit expensive.
Do you feel annoyed when you hear unnecessary noise from the other apartment?
What do you usually do? You can tell me about it later in class.
Teacher Nina
I want to change the wall.
>> Correct
>> OR: I want to change the wall of my room.
My home is one of the apartment.
>> Did you mean: I live in an apartment.
So, we could hear a loud noise.
>> So, we could hear loud noises.
>> OR: We could hear some noise from the other room/ apartment.
There is some special walls that help to not hear the noise.
>> There are special walls that help us no to hear the noise.
>> OR: There is a special wall that will help us not to hear the noise outside.
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