homework :)

2014-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: What is the most important key to maintain a happy family? I think the most important thing in all relationships is belief and understanding. So, the most important key to maintain a happy family is also belief and understanding. belief and understanding are connected each other. If we didn't believe each other, we could not understand each other either. If I didn't understand my family and only want for them to understand me, nobody could consider mind each other finally. We should try to understand mind, words and actions each other.

강사 첨삭

Hello Lisa!
It\'s the start of the weeeeeeeeeeeeeeek. kkkk :3

Thank you for doing your homework as a start off for our August :))
I appreciate all your effort in making this composition and for sharing your ideas with me.

Thanks for trusting me as your teacher :))
Happy learning :D

__T.Myra (\")(^_~)

CORRECTIONS:

I think the most important thing in all relationships is belief and understanding.
>>
I think the two most important things in all relationships are belief and understanding.

So, the most important key to maintain a happy family is also belief and understanding.
>> So, these also apply in maintaining a happy family.
OR>> The same principles apply in maintaining a happy family.

belief and understanding are connected each other.
>>
Belief and understanding are connected with each other.
OR>> Belief and understanding are interrelated.

If we didn\'t believe each other, we could not understand each other either.
>> If we don\'t believe in each other, we could not understand one another either.

If I didn\'t understand my family and only want for them to understand me, nobody could consider mind each other finally.
>> If I couldn\'t understand my family members, and I only want them to understand me, then nobody would consider the feelings of one another.

We should try to understand mind, words and actions each other.
>> We should try to understand the mind, words and actions of each other.

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