homework

Hi there Cindy!

Happy first Monday of the month!

Well, that was a well expounded answer to the topic I have given for your homework.
Thanks for sharing.

You are very well aware of the problems happening in this world.

You comprehensively wrote your composition.

Good job on that.
Anyway, see you later!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

What do you think the most serious problem in the world is? Why?

I think that the biggest problem in the world these days is about the nuclear warfare.

>> correct!
 As I concerned, some counturies like China, Russia, India, which are known for having nuclear weapons, have a more power to make a speech in the international stages than the counturies which don\'t, especially for their economic levels.

>>  As far as I am concern, some countries like China, Russia and India, which are known for having nuclear weapons, have more power to make a speech in the international stage since they are economically  stable than those countries which are not.

This is because of the worldwide fear about nuclear bomb and its aftereffects followed by fatal damages.

>>  correct!

I think this can show how seious this problem is.

>>  I think that it could show how serious the problem is.

Also, throughout the modern history, people have realized dangerousness about deadly nuclear looking at cases of Hisoshima, Chernobyl, and so on.

>>  Also, through out the modern history, people have realized the danger about deadly nuclear such as the cases in Hiroshima bombing and the Chernobyl disaster, and so on.

But some countries try to take some advantages of these fears by threating other counturies with this weapon.

>>  But some countries are taking advantage of this fear by threatening other countries with this weapon.

Even though many international cooperations are ongoing against it, the nuclear weapon problem is still a serious issue on international community.

>>  Even though many international committees /organizations are going against it, the problem in nuclear weapon is still a serious issue in the international community.