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Do you agree that "Too much money is a bad thing?" I agree this topic. Nowdays, I watch American drama named "devious maids". Its main story is about Baverly Hills in America. In this area, there are many riches such as celebrities, leaning businessmen and so on. The riches have a lot of money. But they have many problems too. Money can give advantages but it can make problems such as poverty problem between "siblings" or "husband and wife" or "parents and child". Also some of riches in this drama commit a crime. After that they cover it up by using money. Also they behave as if nothing had happen and they don't have guilty. It is just a drama but I think it is able to happen to people who have too much money. And to conclude, I think too much money is bad thing because can make some serious problems.

Hi there Shelly! Thank you for sending me a reposnse! ^^ It\'s amazing how you come uo with great sentences! This is an advantage of a reader like you. You can come up with a lot of words to express your thoughts and it shows on your answers today! Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Do you agree that \"Too much money is a bad thing?\">> CORRECT OR> What is your idea on \"Too much money is a bad thing?\"I agree this topic. >> I agree with this topic.  Nowdays, I watch American drama named \"devious maids\". >> Nowdays, I watch an American drama named \"devious maids\".  Its main story is about Baverly Hills in America. >> It\'s main story is about Beverly Hills in America. In this area, there are many riches such as celebrities, leaning businessmen and so on. >>  In this area, there are many rich people such as celebrities, leading businessmen and so on. The riches have a lot of money. >> The rich have a lot of money. But they have many problems too. >> CORRECT OR> But they come with lots of problems too. Money can give advantages but it can make problems such as poverty problem between \"siblings\" or \"husband and wife\" or \"parents and child\". >> CORRECT OR> Money can have a lot of benefits but it can create trouble with siblings or married people within the family. Also some of riches in this drama commit a crime. >>  Also some of the rich people in this drama commit a crime. After that they cover it up by using money. >> CORRECT OR> They get away with it with their money. Also they behave as if nothing had happen and they don\'t have guilty. >>  Also they behave as if nothing had happened and they don\'t have guilt. It is just a drama but I think it is able to happen to people who have too much money. >>  It is just a drama but I think it can happen to people who have too much money. And to conclude, I think too much money is bad thing because can make some serious problems. >> And to conclude, I think too much money is a bad thing because it can make serious problems.