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2014-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Hi Paula! How did you do last weekend? I had happy time with my family last weekend. We went out to play the valley near Songni mountain with friend's family. The water of the vallley was very cold, but children were so amused. I thought I had episodes in my classes. When I was in the university, there were a lot of episodes. At that time, I and friends weren't interested in class. Frankly speaking, we cheated on our examinations. Anyone didn't search our skill of cheating. We cut a class for one week, and went to play on the seaside. I don't have epsodes about classes, but I am having a lot of memories that I play hooky. Even though I return to student again, Maybe I will behave such as that time. I have never regrets about my actions. Oh! sorry! That's it for today. Bye!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Jehee! ^.^ Ha-ha-happy Monday! ^^   I just took a rest last weekend. I was so sick, so I needed to stay home.   By the way, I give you a thumbs up for your composition. Don\'t forget to check the corrections and suggestions below.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi Paula!>> CORRECT!How did you do last weekend?>> CORRECY!I had happy time with my family last weekend.>> I had a happy time with my family last weekend.We went out to play the valley near Songni mountain with friend\'s family.>> We went out to play at the valley near Songni Mountain with some family friends.The water of the vallley was very cold, but children were so amused.>> CORRECT!I thought I had episodes in my classes.>> CORRECT!When I was in the university, there were a lot of episodes.>> When I was in university, there were a lot of episodes.At that time, I and friends weren\'t interested in class.>> At that time, I and my friends weren\'t interested in class.Frankly speaking, we cheated on our examinations.>> CORRECT!Anyone didn\'t search our skill of cheating.>> No one find out our skill at cheating.We cut a class for one week, and went to play on the seaside.>> We cut a class for one week and went to play on the seaside.I don\'t have epsodes about classes, but I am having a lot of memories that I play hooky.>> I don\'t have episodes about classes, but I am having a lot of memories that I play hooky.Even though I return to student again, Maybe I will behave such as that time.>> Even though I returned from being student again, maybe I will behave such as that time.I have never regrets about my actions.>> I have never regreted about my actions.Oh! sorry! >> CORRECT!That\'s it for today.>> CORRECT!Bye!!! >> CORRECT!

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