Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1 ESSAY: Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer?
: I prefer traveling with companion to doing alone.
Because, Most women who traveling alone are dangerous, lonely and not interesting.
There are someones who like traveling alone, they can go around separately
after they arrived.
What we have to know, People become known more trues
through the new friends.
2 ESSAY: Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer?
: I prefer to get up late in the morning. Because I have a morning sleep much.
However, I usually get up early every morning.
Because, I should make carrot juice for my husband and me.
We had it every morning.
But.... And then...I sleep as soon as my husband go to work for an hour.
강사 첨삭
Wow, thanks for doing your homework, Ms. [Name]^^
I appreciate knowing your preferences.
Anyways, I can not wait to listen to your voice again~
1 ESSAY: Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer?: I prefer traveling with companion to doing alone.
>> I prefer traveling with companion to being alone.Because, Most women who traveling alone are dangerous, lonely and not interesting.>>Because, it is dangerous, lonely and uninteresting if women travel alone.
There are someones who like traveling alone, they can go around separately, after they arrived. >>There are some who like traveling alone, they can go around separately upon arriving at the destination.
What we have to know, People become known more trues through the new friends.
>>What we have to know is that people know about the truth more through their new friends.2 ESSAY: Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day\'s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer?: I prefer to get up late in the morning.
>> I prefer to get up late in the morning. Because I have a morning sleep much.
>>Because I sleep much in the morning.However, I usually get up early every morning.
>>CORRECT!Because, I should make carrot juice for my husband and me. >>CORRECT!
We had it every morning.
>>We have it every morning.But.... And then...I sleep as soon as my husband go to work for an hour.
>>But, as soon as my husband goes to work, I sleep for an hour more.
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