homework ;-)
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon Jane ;-)
Here is my homework.
Nowadays, with the invention of the microwave and with the popularity of fast food restaurants, food has become easier to prepare than ever. Do you think microwave ovens and fast food restaurants are beneficial to society?
- I'am not sure that microwave is beneficial invention.
From that time I live apart from my own family, I can't use microwave in 4 years.
During that period, I don't have any inconvience.
So I don't agree microwave ovens are beneficial to society.
:-D hahaha
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! You got me confused with your answer. Well for me, microwave is beneficial when I am at work. However, at home, I usually cook my food with the use of the gas range. As for fastfood, they\'re tasty but I don\'t like them that much anymore since I want to shave off some weight. Have a nice day!
T. JanE ^^
Good afternoon Jane ;-)>> Correct
Here is my homework.>> Correct Nowadays, with the invention of the microwave and with the popularity of fast food restaurants, food has become easier to prepare than ever. Do you think microwave ovens and fast food restaurants are beneficial to society? >> Correct - I\'am not sure that microwave is beneficial invention.>> I am not sure whether microwave is a beneficial invention or not.
From that time I live apart from my own family, I can\'t use microwave in 4 years.
>> I haven\'t used the microwave for four years now that I live apart from my family.
During that period, I don\'t have any inconvience.>> So far, I don\'t feel any inconvenience.
So I don\'t agree microwave ovens are beneficial to society.>> So I don\'t agree that microwave ovens are beneficial to the society. :-D hahaha
>> Correct
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