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How do you raise well-behaved children?
- i want to start by making a definition of well-behaved children. First, well behaved is a kind of following ruels and etiquette well and children is not yet an adult who knows what to do and what not to do.
To raise children who know what they have to do, i gonna teach them about what is a right thing for them and what is bad behavior. So, once they fell the difference of wrong and right, i think, they get to a stage where they have plenty of opportunities to become well-behaved children. But, it's difficult to be well-behaved children unless they make it a habit. Between knowing the difference and behaving that difference, there is a lot of gap.
Most important thing in teaching children is showing them first and telling them second. No children don't follow their parent's behaviors. Therefore, parent should be aware of it and pay great attention on what they are doing in front of children.
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Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
You did very well explaining your answer! Keep it up!
I agree with you! They are children, therefor they don\'t know what is right from what is wrong. So we have to teach them by showing it to them.
You will be a great father someday!
Anyway, check your corrections! Have a great day ad take care^^
~T.Chelsea
How do you raise well-behaved children?- i want to start by making a definition of well-behaved children.
>> I want to start by explaining the definition of well-behaved children.
First, well behaved is a kind of following ruels and etiquette well and children is not yet an adult who knows what to do and what not to do.
>> First well-behaved children are following the rules and etiquette vey well. And children are not adults who know right anf wrong.To raise children who know what they have to do, i gonna teach them about what is a right thing for them and what is bad behavior.
>> To raise children who know what they have to do is teaching them about what are the right things for them and what are the bad behaviors.
So, once they fell the difference of wrong and right, i think, they get to a stage where they have plenty of opportunities to become well-behaved children.
>> So, once thel know the difference between right and wrong, they get to the stage where thay have plenty of opportunities to become well-behaved children.
But, it\'s difficult to be well-behaved children unless they make it a habit.
>> CORRECT^^
Between knowing the difference and behaving that difference, there is a lot of gap.
>> There\'s a big gap between knowing the difference and behaving differently.Most important thing in teaching children is showing them first and telling them second.
>> The most important things in teaching children are; first, show them and second, tell them.
No children don\'t follow their parent\'s behaviors.
>> There are no children who don\'t follow their parents\' behavior.
Therefore, parent should be aware of it and pay great attention on what they are doing in front of children.
>> Therefore, parents should be aware of it and pay great attention on what they are doing in front of their children.
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