homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:
Who was your greatest hero as a child?
Answer in 3 sentences only.
my greatest hero as a child was my mother. (she is still my hero now.:-) )
she always listened to me and understood my words and acts.
I could always talk to her a lot of things about myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my pretty Lisa!! ^^
Thanks for sharing your ideas on this composition.
It\'s so nice to know that you consider your mom as your hero! :)
I hope you\'ll always love your mom...
Have a nice day and see you later~~
_T. Myra (\").^^)
CORRECTIONS:
My greatest hero as a child was my mother. (she is still my hero now.:-) )
>>CORRECT
OR>> My greatest hero as a child was my mother, and she will always be my hero.
she always listened to me and understood my words and acts.
>>She always listens and understands my words and actions. (*when you use always, you must use present tense)
I could always talk to her a lot of things about myself.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I can always share a lot of things to her about myself.
Thanks for sharing your ideas on this composition.
It\'s so nice to know that you consider your mom as your hero! :)
I hope you\'ll always love your mom...
Have a nice day and see you later~~
_T. Myra (\").^^)
CORRECTIONS:
My greatest hero as a child was my mother. (she is still my hero now.:-) )
>>CORRECT
OR>> My greatest hero as a child was my mother, and she will always be my hero.
she always listened to me and understood my words and acts.
>>She always listens and understands my words and actions. (*when you use always, you must use present tense)
I could always talk to her a lot of things about myself.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I can always share a lot of things to her about myself.
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