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2014-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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see look see watch see My clown fish is still alive. They become bigger and bigger. They should live forever. I feel the piece of mind when I see them.

강사 첨삭

Hello Tom! Wow! That\'s nice. Breeding fishes is really great. Actually some people say that it is a goodluck at home. And that\'s the reason why I also take good care of fishes. You almost got a perfect score.Please go over the corrections. We\'ll work on your vocabulary skills more. Teacher Nina   see >> CORRECT! look >> CORRECT! see >> WATCHwatch >> CORRECT! see >> CORRECT! My clown fish is still alive. >> CORRECT! They become bigger and bigger. >> CORRECT! >> OR: They grow bigger each day. They should live forever. >> CORRECT! I feel the piece of mind when I see them. >> I feel peace when I see them. >> OR: I have a piece of mind when I see them.

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