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2014-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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How can you learn from other people? Give an example of something you learned from someone else and explain why and how you learned it. I learn how to get a good result in the challenging situations from one of my friends. She did her best in almost every situation, such as team project, various exams in the class. The way she tried to do is as follows. First of all, whenever the professors give a assignment or such tasks, she began to prepare it just from the day. For example, if we had a team project with her, we didn't have to be worried or be nervous about it, as she always made a schedule for it in advance, so all we have to do was just following those plans. Due to that, we could make a steady progress and complete all the tasks within time, not in a hurry. Being a friend of her for about 1 year, I realized why she always gets a good grade in exams and achieve great results. Since then, I decided to change my lazy lifestyle and try to go closer to her industrious attitude.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Cindy!

I applaud yo0ur friend for being so diligent in her studies.

Not all student could do that.

I was not like her when I was studying, honestly speaking. kkkkk

But the good thing is, she influenced you in a very good way.

You learn how to become like her too.

And I do hope that you would continue doing it.
Thanks for sending your composition.

See you later!

Always,
Kathrine ^^


How can you learn from other people? Give an example of something you learned from someone else and explain why and how you learned it.
I learn how to get a good result in the challenging situations from one of my friends.

>>  correct!

She did her best in almost every situation, such as team project, various exams in the class.

>>  She did her best in almost every situation, such as team projects, and various exams in the class.

The way she tried to do is as follows.

>>   correct!

First of all, whenever the professors give a assignment or such tasks, she began to prepare it just from the day.

>>  First of all, whenever the professors give an assignment or such tasks, she began to prepare it on the same day.

For example, if we had a team project with her, we didn\'t have to be worried or be nervous about it, as she always made a schedule for it in advance, so all we have to do was just following those plans.

>>  correct!

>> or: For example, if we have a team project with her, we do not have to be worried or nervous about it because she always make a schedule for it in advance. So all we have to do is just to follow those plans.

Due to that, we could make a steady progress and complete all the tasks within time, not in a hurry.

>>  Due to that/Because of that, we could make a steady progress and complete all the tasks within the time, and not in a hurry.

Being a friend of her for about 1 year, I realized why she always gets a good grade in exams and achieve great results.

>>  correct!

Since then, I decided to change my lazy lifestyle and try to go closer to her industrious attitude.

>>  correct!

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