homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning Cindy!
I applaud yo0ur friend for being so diligent in her studies.
Not all student could do that.
I was not like her when I was studying, honestly speaking. kkkkk
But the good thing is, she influenced you in a very good way.
You learn how to become like her too.
And I do hope that you would continue doing it.
Thanks for sending your composition.
See you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How can you learn from other people? Give an example of something you learned from someone else and explain why and how you learned it.
I learn how to get a good result in the challenging situations from one of my friends.
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She did her best in almost every situation, such as team project, various exams in the class.
>> She did her best in almost every situation, such as team projects, and various exams in the class.
The way she tried to do is as follows.
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First of all, whenever the professors give a assignment or such tasks, she began to prepare it just from the day.
>> First of all, whenever the professors give an assignment or such tasks, she began to prepare it on the same day.
For example, if we had a team project with her, we didn\'t have to be worried or be nervous about it, as she always made a schedule for it in advance, so all we have to do was just following those plans.
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>> or: For example, if we have a team project with her, we do not have to be worried or nervous about it because she always make a schedule for it in advance. So all we have to do is just to follow those plans.
Due to that, we could make a steady progress and complete all the tasks within time, not in a hurry.
>> Due to that/Because of that, we could make a steady progress and complete all the tasks within the time, and not in a hurry.
Being a friend of her for about 1 year, I realized why she always gets a good grade in exams and achieve great results.
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Since then, I decided to change my lazy lifestyle and try to go closer to her industrious attitude.
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