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I'll go camping with my father on June sixteenth.
It will be a lot of fun.
It is the first time that I camp with my dad.
So I'm so exciting.
강사 첨삭
Hi Tom!Wow! Really? Oh! It will be really fun!
I am sure that you have a lot of things on mind such as what are you going to do and what are you going to bring. HIhihi/
It sounds that you are really excited. Hahaha!
I can\'t remember that last time I went camping. Hihihi!
Anyway, you did a nice job! But I think we need to work on the usage of prepositions.We can do it. Just always believe in your abilities and work with me. Thanks for your time.
Teacher Nina
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>> CORRECT! to
>> CORRECT! for
>> CORRECT! about
>> CORRECT! at
>> CORRECT! in
>> FOR by
>> WITHof
>> CORRECT! on
>> IN of
>> CORRECT! I\'ll go camping with my father on June sixteenth.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I\'ll go camping with my father on the sixteenth of August. ( The month of June already passed. Hihihihi ^^ )It will be a lot of fun.
>> CORRECT! It is the first time that I camp with my dad.
>> It is the first time that I will go camping with my dad. So I\'m so exciting.
>> So, I\'m so excited.
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