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2014-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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The most expencive thing is me. We can't pay the money of human's life. Sometimes some kill themselves. But they are fully.How can we kill ourselves?

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What a great essay Tom! Yahoo! Congratulations! Your ideas were great! You impressed me again today! Happy Friday! I definitely agree with you. Money can\'t buy life and hapiness. I don\'t know why there are people who take their own lives. How about you?Can you tell me about your opninons in class. Teacher Nina   The most expencive thing is me. >> The most expensive I have is myself. >> OR: I consider myself as the most expensive thing.We can\'t pay the money of human\'s life. >> We can\'t pay money in exchange of a person\'s life. >> OR: Money can\'t buy a person\'s life. Sometimes some kill themselves. >> There are times that some people kill themselves. But they are fully. >> What do you mean in this sentence? Can you please tell me about it in class? Thanks ^^ How can we kill ourselves? >> Correct >> OR: How can we take our own life?

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