Homework

2014-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. He is dreaming. 2. It is dreen. 3. They are on the wall. 4. It is running. 5. We are watching TV. 6. They are in the garden. 7. He is riding his bike. 8. She is from Bristol. 9. She has got a brother. 10. You have got a computer, Mandy?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] Se^^
Wow! Perfect score!

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I encourage you to write longer essays.

I also want to help you improve your writing skill. ^^

How are you today? I hope that you are having a great weekend.

Talk to you on Monday! Take Care!

Teacher Nina


1. He is dreaming.
>> Correct!
2. It is dreen.
>> Correct! ( green ^^)
3. They are on the wall.
>> Correct! 
4. It is running.
>> Correct! 
5. We are watching TV.
>> Correct! 
6. They are in the garden.
>> Correct! 
7. He is riding his bike.
>> Correct! 
8. She is from Bristol.
>> Correct! 
9. She has got a brother.
>> Correct! 
10. You have got a computer, Mandy?

>> Correct

>> Better: Have you got a computer, Mandy?

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