homework :)
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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:
How can you be a role model to others?
Explain in 3-5 sentences.
I always think that I want to be a role model to others someday.
as a friend, wife, teacher and mother..Everything is good.
To be a role model to others, I should always act correctly and friendly.
Things like refined language, a regular life and understanding are all base to be a role model.
강사 첨삭
Hi Lisa!!
It\'s a great Monday!
I hope you\'ll do your homework throughout the week ~~ (^^.
_T.Myra_
CORRECTIONS:
I always think that I want to be a role model to others someday.
>>CORRECT
OR>> I always dream of being a role model to others someday.
as a friend, wife, teacher and mother..Everything is good.
>> It\'s good to be a role model as as a friend, wife, teacher and mother.
To be a role model to others, I should always act correctly and friendly.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I should always show good manners and right conduct.
Things like refined language, a regular life and understanding are all base to be a role model.
>>Things like refined language, a regular life and understanding are all basis in being a role model.
It\'s a great Monday!
I hope you\'ll do your homework throughout the week ~~ (^^.
_T.Myra_
CORRECTIONS:
I always think that I want to be a role model to others someday.
>>CORRECT
OR>> I always dream of being a role model to others someday.
as a friend, wife, teacher and mother..Everything is good.
>> It\'s good to be a role model as as a friend, wife, teacher and mother.
To be a role model to others, I should always act correctly and friendly.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I should always show good manners and right conduct.
Things like refined language, a regular life and understanding are all base to be a role model.
>>Things like refined language, a regular life and understanding are all basis in being a role model.
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