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2014-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I think I would do differntly if I knew nobody would judge me. When I get some compliments , I feel good. but in other hands, Ifeel bad. Human can't be alone. so we are always conscious of the way other people are looking at . And also,we are trying to get some reputation from other people. But if nobody would judge me,I might get loose. Thankyou.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! Indeed, it\'s human nature to care about what other people say. For this reason, we tend to display our finest attitude when we mingle with people. If nobody would judge me, I would let out my anger anytime I want to in order to relieve myself from stress. However, since I have to consider what others might say, I have to keep my tact. T. JanE ^^ I think I would do differntly if I knew nobody would judge me.>> I think I would act differently if I knew nobody would judge me.  When I get some compliments , I feel good. >> Correct but in other hands, Ifeel bad.>> But if I get otherwise, I feel bad.  Human can\'t be alone.>> No man can be alone.  so we are always conscious of the way other people are looking at .>> So we are always conscious of the way people look at us. And also,we are trying to get some reputation from other people.>> Also, we try to build good reputation to other people.  But if nobody would judge me, I might get loose.>> Correct Thank you. >> Correct  

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