Homework
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ESSAY: Some people think that the family is the most important influence
on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence
on young adults.
Which do you think has the most important influence?
: I think, both family and friends are important influence.
Young adults learn about social ability through their friends and
learn about home education through their family.
All the people learn and master competition, cooperation
through their family and friends.
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ESSAY: Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which do you think has the most important influence?: I think, both family and friends are important influence.
>>I think, both family and friends are important influences. Young adults learn about social ability through their friends and learn about home education through their family. >>CORRECT!
All the people learn and master competition, cooperation through their family and friends.
>>All people learn and master competition and cooperation through their family and friends.
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