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Do you think all Koreans must learn how to speak in English?
No, I don't. Some people need to learn how to speak English. But I think all people don't have to learn it. There are some people who need to use when they work or do something but this is not for all. I think, of course, English is very important because it is the public language in the whole world. But it tneds to be considered too important in Korea. Even though we find a job which doesn't use English or doesn't need that, English is first condition for passing resume screening in Korea. So I think it is very irrational and unnecessary. As a result, I think it is important how to speak English but the most important thing is that is for "some".
강사 첨삭
Hi there Shelly^^
I think your answer is great. It\'s not a requirement to learn English but it\'s something
that we must practice since it\'s now considered a skill.
It has become an idea all over the world that it it competitive to have English skills.
Don\'t give up with your English skills!^^ You are doing great!^^
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Do you think all Koreans must learn how to speak in English?
>> CORRECT
OR> Must all Koreans speak in English?No, I don\'t. Some people need to learn how to speak English.
>> CORRECT
OR> I disagree. Everybody doesn\'t need to speak in English.
But I think all people don\'t have to learn it.
>> CORRECT
OR> There is no need for some people to learn it.
There are some people who need to use when they work or do something but this is not for all.
>> There are some people who need to use it when they work or do something but this is not for all. I think, of course, English is very important because it is the public language in the whole world.
>> I think, of course, English is very important because it is the widely used language in the whole world. But it tneds to be considered too important in Korea.
>> But it tends to be considered too important in Korea. Even though we find a job which doesn\'t use English or doesn\'t need that, English is first condition for passing resume screening in Korea.
>> Even though we found a job which doesn\'t use English or doesn\'t need that, English is first condition for passing a resume or screening in Korea. So I think it is very irrational and unnecessary.
>>CORRECT
OR> It\'s becoming unreasonable.
As a result, I think it is important how to speak English but the most important thing is that is for \"some\".
>> As a result, I think it is important to learn how to speak English but the most important thing is that it is for \"some\".
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