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2014-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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with in black you and me pay for not to the bookstore is first two a delicious coffee hung There is a bad news. The actor named Robin Williams killed himself. How sad!! One of my favorite actor was Robin Williams. Many people condolence to him.

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Hi there Tom! Yahoo! It\'s already Tueday! I hope that you are having a great week. I really admire you for doing your best in class. Keep it up! I encourage you to use new words to express your ideas. It will help you be great at English. Don\'t settle for the words we already know. Improve your vocabulary skill. ^^ I\'m here to help you. It will help us hit the next level. I heard about that news. I also like him I am really wondering why he killed himself. Anyway, let\'s talk about this later. Please go over the corrections below. If you have any questions about the answers, ask me in class. Teacher Nina     with >> atin black >> Correct! you and me >> Correct! pay for >> paynot to >> Correct! 6. >> never have I seenthe bookstore is >> Correct! first two >> Correct! >> OR: the first two a delicious coffee >> Correct! hung >> hanged There is a bad news. >> Correct! The actor named Robin Williams killed himself. >> Correct! >> OR: The actor named Robin Williams committed suicide. How sad!! >> Correct! One of my favorite actor was Robin Williams. >> Correct! Many people condolence to him. >> Many people send condolences to his family. >> OR: Many people are sad about it.

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