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Do you think games like lottery give people false hopes?
Yes, i think lottery give people false hopes.
Because lottery have low probability to win.
So it is very hard to get a lot of money.
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Do you think games like lottery give people false hopes?Yes, i think lottery give people false hopes.
>> Yes, I think lottery gives people false hopes.Because lottery have low probability to win.
>> Because there is a low probability for people to win.So it is very hard to get a lot of money.
>> Correct.
>> or: So it is very hard to win.
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