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<< ESSAY:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time
become valuable lessons for the future.
: Most difficult experiences are not really good.
For example, Getting divorced, Losing own all fortune.
The young death of son and daughter, or their own self,
Falling in bad disease ....and so on...
Soon, they are extremely stressful.
Maybe, they will say ' To be or Not to be..that's the problem'
They can be a pessimist.
However, Experiences of some degree are very special for the future.
I want to use my brain, well.
<< ESSAY: Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business.
Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business?
: I prefer to get into a major company or government.
To be a self employed is dangerous, nowadays.
By reason of economic depression.
Some people who want to run their own business need brilliant ideas, enough capitals.
a predict ability of the future, and a finance management ability.
I think, according to the recession,
running their own business will be hard, increasingly.
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Happy Wednesday, Miss. [Name]^^
There are really painful experiences in our lives which will eventually make us stronger~
Thanks for telling me your opinion on these topics.
Have a great day, see you!
<< ESSAY:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future.: Most difficult experiences are not really good.
>>Most difficult experiences are not really good. For example, Getting divorced, Losing own all fortune.
>>For example, getting divorced or losing one\'s all fortune. The young death of son and daughter, or their own self, Falling in bad disease ....and so on...
>>In addition, it is also painful to see the untimely death of a son or a daughter, falling ill, and so on...
Soon, they are extremely stressful.
>>CORRECT!Maybe, they will say \' To be or Not to be..that\'s the problem\'
>>Maybe, they will say, \"To be or Not to be..that\'s the question\".They can be a pessimist.
>>They can be pessimists. However, Experiences of some degree are very special for the future.
>>However, experiences of some degree are very special for the future. I want to use my brain, well.
>>I want to use my brain well. ESSAY: Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business?: I prefer to get into a major company or government.
>> I prefer to get into a major company or government. To be a self employed is dangerous, nowadays.
>>To be self employed is dangerous, nowadays. By reason of economic depression.
>>Nowadays, to be self employed is dangerous because of economic depression. Some people who want to run their own business need brilliant ideas, enough capitals. a predict ability of the future, and a finance management ability. >>Some people who want to run their own business need brilliant ideas, enough capital, predictability of the future, and financial management ability.
I think, according to the recession, running their own business will be hard, increasingly.
>>I think, according to the recession, running their own business will be increasingly hard.
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