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Hi Debby :)
I should have done this right away, but i was too sleepy.
Now I feel good although a little powerless.
Is it really helpful to watch the same film a dozen times? Although I wactch drama series without subtitles, I haven't thought about that. I remember that some people obtain English by watching the same moive several times. Um... I also need to try it.
Then see you
Take care :)
<Essay>
No, this is not. Apparently, English really have much influence but companies that only have for domestic targets don't have to learn English. If there's other chances for learning other things, it will be good to use time for those chances rather than English.
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Hi [이름]!^^
I\'m still thankful that you took the time out of you sleepy moments
to send me back this reply before I end my day!^^ hahahaha
It is truly heart warming if students make an effort to do things for their studies!^^
You did great sentences today and I\'m impressed you managed to write long ones
even if you feel sleepy!^^
You might feel weak because of too much sleep!
Drink juice!^^ Power up and do something fun!
Keep it up!^^
Take care!^^
T.DebbY^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hi Debby :)
>> CORRECTI should have done this right away, but i was too sleepy.
>> CORRECT
OR> I was supposed to finish this earlier but I was so sleepy!^^Now I feel good although a little powerless.>> CORRECT
OR> I feel better but now I feel a little weak.Is it really helpful to watch the same film a dozen times?]
>> CORRECT
OR> Is it really effective to watch a movie several times? Although I wactch drama series without subtitles, I haven\'t thought about that.
>> CORRECT
OR> I do watch some dramas but it hasn\'t crossed my mind to try that. I remember that some people obtain English by watching the same moive several times.
>> I remember that some people obtain English by watching the same movie several times.
Um... I also need to try it.
>> CORRECT
OR> I think that I must try.Then see youTake care :)>> CORRECT
OR> Catch you later. Take care^^<Essay>No, this is not.
>> CORRECT
OR> This is not the case.Apparently, English really have much influence but companies that only have for domestic targets don\'t have to learn English.
>> Apparently, English really has much influence but companies that have domestic targets only don\'t need to learn English. If there\'s other chances for learning other things, it will be good to use time for those chances rather than English.
>> If there\'s other chances for learning other things, it will be good to use the time for those chances rather than only for English.
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