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2014-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi Debby :) I think it is better to do now rathen than later. When I was running on the treadmill, I was watching NGO channel. In the program that I saw, someone said like "It looks like clock works.". I guess it means that something is gone to the right direction, right? The reason I think like that is this word came after the work that they've got to do is done. I think I can use this usefully. Maybe I can get more useful words that can use in life. Take care :D <Essay> I'm not sure. I think It doesn't matter how many women there are in the government. The member of the government should be a person who want to serve for the government. How do you think about that?

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Hi [이름]!^^ I hope you enjoy your new homework!^^ hahahahahahaha A lot of jobs before have to consider gender since the idea before was that men are more capable than women and that women stayed at home. The times had changed and the people are now open-minded for gender equality. You are correct!^^ It won\'t matter if the person is a man or a woman as long as people in the Government are loyal and responsible!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hi Debby :) >> Hello Debby^^I think it is better to do now rathen than later.>> CORRECT Or> The earlier it\'s better!^^When I was running on the treadmill, I was watching NGO channel. >> CORRECT OR> I was watching NatGeo channel while on the treadmill.In the program that I saw, someone said like \"It looks like clock works.\" >> CORRECT OR> I heard the line It looks like clock work\". I guess it means that something is gone to the right direction, right? >> CORRECT OR> I was thinking it meant tha something is done correctly.The reason I think like that is this word came after the work that they\'ve got to do is done. >> CORRECT OR> I think so because they mentioned it after doing a something.I think I can use this usefully. >> I think I can use this conviniently. Maybe I can get more useful words that can use in life. >> Maybe I can get more useful words that I can use in life.Take care :D<Essay>I\'m not sure. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m doubtful. I think It doesn\'t matter how many women there are in the government. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s not important if there are a lot of women in the Government.The member of the government should be a person who want to serve for the government. >> The members of the Government should be a people who want to serve for the Government. How do you think about that? >> What do you think about that?  

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