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2014-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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it is important to feep my house clean. Because a visitor may br feel uncomfortable. Also clean house make me healthy. There won't be no vermin like cockroach,mite and ant. We must feep our house clean.

강사 첨삭

Good day to you Tom! Happy Thursday! Yahoo! You can spend more time with your family. I hope that you will have a wonderful time with them. I definitely agree with you, we should always keep our house clean. Some people say that the cleanliness of our house reflects our personality. Anyway, thank you for your homework. You did great. Be careful with the spelling of some words and your sentence structure. Talk to you later.Teacher Nina   it is important to feep my house clean. >> It is important ot keep my house clean. ( spelling check: keep ^^) Because a visitor may br feel uncomfortable. >> Because a visitor might feel uncomfortable.>> OR: The visitors might feel uneasy. Also clean house make me healthy. >> Also, cleaning the house makes me healthy. There won\'t be no vermin like cockroach,mite and ant. >> There won\'t be vermin such as cockroach, mite and ants. >> OR: There won\'t be insects such as cockroach, mite and ants.We must feep our house clean. >> We must keep our house clean.

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