Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the best way to protect a person's health?
I think exercise on regular basis is the best way to protect a person's health.
doing exercise can reduce risk of disease such as high blood pressure, cancer.
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
Thank your for your answer in todays homework.
Do you exercise to keep your body healthy? I hope you do. kkk
Anyway, take care and see you in class.
~KeLLy~
What is the best way to protect a person\'s health?I think exercise on regular basis is the best way to protect a person\'s health.>> I think exercising on a regular basis is the best way to protect a person\'s health.
doing exercise can reduce risk of disease such as high blood pressure, cancer.
>> Exercise can reduce the risk of acquiring diseases such as high blood pressure and cancer.
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