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Hello Debby :) It was a really long holiday. How was your holiday? I spent almost all time for the moutain time(MT). Unfortunately, there's no friends that can share some talks in English with me. All of my friends don't have any interest to learn speaking but TOEIC. It's sad. Instead, there's a program for talking with foreigners in my university. But I'm not going to enroll that becasue I need more time to adapt and adjust my schedule skillfullly. I had a lot of troubles to adjust my schedule in the last semester. I'm not hardened for it yet. And about Kitchen Nightmare, let me tell you in the class. See you in the class. Take care :D <Essay> Yes, I agree. If they achieve good grades or something, they deserve to take some rewards for that. But it shouldn't be a natural thing because they can behave only for rewards not his genuine mind. Um... I think it's a little hard.

Hi there [이름]!^^ So you took my advice and watched the show? hahahahahaha.. I\'m happy!^^ I\'m so excited to know your reaction!^^ Was is good? I wonder what episode you watched. My favorite was with ABC restaurant where the owner was given the name \"crazy Amy!^^ I hope you had fun with it!^^ Take care^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hello Debby :)>> CORRECT OR> Hey there Debby^^It was a really long holiday. >> CORRECT OR> The holiday was quite long!^^How was your holiday? >> CORRECT Or> How did you spend your holiday?I spent almost all time for the moutain time(MT). >> I spent almost all of my time for the mountain time(MT).Unfortunately, there\'s no friends that can share some talks in English with me. >> Unfortunately, there are no friends that can share some talks in English with me. All of my friends don\'t have any interest to learn speaking but TOEIC. >> CORRECT OR> All of my friends don\'t have any interest in learning speaking but only for TOEIC.  It\'s sad. Instead, there\'s a program for talking with foreigners in my university. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s quite unfortunate but there is a program from the University that features speaking to foreigners.But I\'m not going to enroll that becasue I need more time to adapt and adjust my schedule skillfullly. >> But I\'m not going to enroll that because I need more time to adapt and adjust with my schedule skillfullly. I had a lot of troubles to adjust my schedule in the last semester. >> I had a lot of trouble to adjust my schedule in the last semester.  I\'m not hardened for it yet.>> CORRECT Or> I\'m not prepared for it yet.And about Kitchen Nightmare, let me tell you in the class.>> CORRECT OR> I will tell you in class about Kitchen Nightmare.See you in the class!Take care :D >> CORRECTOR> Catch you in class!^^<Essay>Yes, I agree. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m on the same side!^^ If they achieve good grades or something, they deserve to take some rewards for that. >> CORRECT OR> They deserve something after making an acheivement on grades.But it shouldn\'t be a natural thing because they can behave only for rewards not his genuine mind. >> But it shouldn\'t be a natural thing because they can behave only for rewards not for a genuine mind.  Um... I think it\'s a little hard. >> CORRECT OR> I think that would be difficult.