homework
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Homework answer.->If I start my own business, I would like to run a convention meeting planner. I have a variety of experiences on international meeting and I had good performance as a presenter and planner.
Regarding who made my name?
This is my answer.
In Korea, When parents have a baby, many people turn to naming specialists because they believe that child's fortune is determined by its name and parents defer to naming specialists. My name also was made by the specialist. My name consists of Chinese characters Kyoung means 'repectful or admirable' and Hee means "woman".
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CORRECTIONS:
If I start my own business, I would like to run a convention meeting planner.
>> If I start my own business, I would like to run a convention meeting planning business.
I have a variety of experiences on international meeting and I had good performance as a presenter and planner.
>> I have a variety of experiences regarding international meetings and I had good performance as a presenter and planner.
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In Korea, When parents have a baby, many people turn to naming specialists because they believe that child\'s fortune is determined by its name and parents defer to naming specialists.
>>In Korea, when parents have a baby, many people turn to naming specialists because they believe that a child\'s fortune is determined by its name thus, parents defer to naming specialists.
My name also was made by the specialist.
>> My name was also made by a specialist.
My name consists of Chinese characters Kyoung means \'respectful or admirable\' and Hee means \"woman\".
>> CORRECT
OR>>> My name consists of Chinese characters namely, Kyoung means \'respectful or admirable\' and Hee means \"woman\".
Thanks for being so diligent in doing your homework. Keep up that spirit! :D
CORRECTIONS:
If I start my own business, I would like to run a convention meeting planner.
>> If I start my own business, I would like to run a convention meeting planning business.
I have a variety of experiences on international meeting and I had good performance as a presenter and planner.
>> I have a variety of experiences regarding international meetings and I had good performance as a presenter and planner.
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In Korea, When parents have a baby, many people turn to naming specialists because they believe that child\'s fortune is determined by its name and parents defer to naming specialists.
>>In Korea, when parents have a baby, many people turn to naming specialists because they believe that a child\'s fortune is determined by its name thus, parents defer to naming specialists.
My name also was made by the specialist.
>> My name was also made by a specialist.
My name consists of Chinese characters Kyoung means \'respectful or admirable\' and Hee means \"woman\".
>> CORRECT
OR>>> My name consists of Chinese characters namely, Kyoung means \'respectful or admirable\' and Hee means \"woman\".
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