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2014-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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My country don't have a culture like giving tips. But,if there is a culture like giving tip,I'll leave a tip. Because,it is manners for workers.

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Good day Tom!! Oh! It\'s nice to hear from you again. ^^ Yahoo! It\'s Monday! We\'re back to improve your skills more. I hope that you had a great time last weekend. How was your campling? Tell me about it in class. Giving a tip is also good. It can help other people. Anyway, I hope that you will have a great week. Talk to you in class.Teacher Nina   My country don\'t have a culture like giving tips. >> My country doesn\'t have a culture in giving tips. >> OR: In our culture, we don\'t give tips. But,if there is a culture like giving tip,I\'ll leave a tip. >> Correct ( Try to use new words. ^^ You can do it ) >> OR: But if it is included in our culture, I\'ll give a tip. Because,it is manners for workers. >> Because it is a good manner for workers. >> OR: Because workers will benefit from it.

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