homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My country don't have a culture like giving tips.
But,if there is a culture like giving tip,I'll leave a tip.
Because,it is manners for workers.
강사 첨삭
Good day Tom!!
Oh! It\'s nice to hear from you again. ^^
Yahoo! It\'s Monday!
We\'re back to improve your skills more.
I hope that you had a great time last weekend.
How was your campling? Tell me about it in class.
Giving a tip is also good. It can help other people.
Anyway, I hope that you will have a great week.
Talk to you in class.Teacher Nina
My country don\'t have a culture like giving tips.
>> My country doesn\'t have a culture in giving tips.
>> OR: In our culture, we don\'t give tips. But,if there is a culture like giving tip,I\'ll leave a tip.
>> Correct ( Try to use new words. ^^ You can do it )
>> OR: But if it is included in our culture, I\'ll give a tip. Because,it is manners for workers.
>> Because it is a good manner for workers.
>> OR: Because workers will benefit from it.
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