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2014-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I think the advances of learning about life by advice is we can get a lot of ideas. Also, the advances of experience is having an experiences can broaden my horizons. I prefer experience because because we can get a lot of new ideas from experiences. We need to think to big to solve all kinds of problems. Eventually broad horizons will lead to better decisions.

강사 첨삭

There you go^^ Thanks for doing your homework, Adam! I love your vocabularies~ They are really impressive! I think the advances of learning about life by advice is we can get a lot of ideas. >>I think the advances of learning about life through pieces advice is that we can get a lot of ideas.Also, the advances of experience is having an experiences can broaden my horizons. >>Also, the advantages of experience is that it can broaden my horizons.I prefer experience because because we can get a lot of new ideas from experiences. >>I prefer experience because we can get a lot of new ideas from it.We need to think to big to solve all kinds of problems. >>We need to think about big solutions to all kinds of problems.Eventually broad horizons will lead to better decisions. >>CORRECT!  

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