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Hello Debby :) Maybe what you said to me is Amy's Baking Company, right? It was, um... quiet mess. I couldn't understand all things but it's enought for me to understand whole context and what is a problem. It was quiet surprising and shock actually. I want to talk about this mess with you quickly. haha And you said that picking a book up and reading will help me to improve my English skill. Then do you have any recommendation? One day, I want to try to read a English book like what you advise. Then let me see you again. Be safe :D <Essay> I'm not sure. Before launching a smart phone, I can absolutely say that we are. But after smart phones come up, we tend to depend on phones instead of computers. It doesn't mean that computers don't have huge influences any more, but the influences of smart phones become bigger and bigger.

Hi there [이름]!^^ I might say that you are becoming very expressive. It\'s like hearing you speak when I read your sentences. I think that you have more to say but the space is not enough!^^ hahahahha. Yes! computers are essential but smart phones are more influencial!^^ I will talk to you about the ABC episode later!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hello Debby :) >> CORRECT OR> Hey there Debby^^Maybe what you said to me is Amy\'s Baking Company, right? >> CORRECT Or> You told me about Amy\'s Baking Company right?It was, um... quiet mess. >> CORRECT OR> It was trouble!^^ I couldn\'t understand all things but it\'s enought for me to understand whole context and what is a problem.>>  I couldn\'t understand all of the things but it\'s enough for me to understand the whole context and what is the problem.It was quiet surprising and shock actually.   >>It was quiet surprising and a shock actually.   I want to talk about this mess with you quickly. haha>> CORRECT OR> I would like a discussion about this right away!^^And you said that picking a book up and reading will help me to improve my English skill. >> CORRECT OR> You have mentioned that reading books can help me get better.Then do you have any recommendation? >> CORRECT OR> Can you recommend anything? One day, I want to try to read a English book like what you advise. >> One day, I want to try to read an English book like what you advise.Then let me see you again.Be safe :D>> CORRECT OR> See you later!^^<Essay> I\'m not sure. Before launching a smart phone, I can absolutely say that we are. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m not 100 percent about it but I would agree to this before the popularity of smart phones.But after smart phones come up, we tend to depend on phones instead of computers. >> CORRECT OR> The attention was moved to smart phones once they were out in the market. It doesn\'t mean that computers don\'t have huge influences any more, but the influences of smart phones become bigger and bigger. >> CORRECT OR> I won\'t mean that computers lost their essence but the smart phones are much more influencial.