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Hi there Debby :)
Sorry for waiting a lot. I just work up and realized that I overslept today again. I set my alarm clock in my phone and dad phone as well. But why didn't I wake up? It's weird! :'(
I really want to talk with you today especially about Kichen Nightmares that I saw.
Forgive me for being absent.
I'm going to see you tommorow intead.
Take care.
<Essay>
What child behavior is better or worse depends on parents I think. If they teach their child appropriately, kids' behavior will be better. Or not, their behavior will be worse. It's a simple matter.
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Hi there [이름]!^^
Waiting for you gave me a coffee break!^^ hahahahaha
It\'s okay I know that you will send me an explanation.
As a punishment you will sing to me! (I\'m kidding)
You need to develop a biological clock and not rely on alarm clocks.
I think you had offset that because your sleeping habits during the vacation
has changed. ^^
Parents are said to be the reflection of their children and vice versa.
I totally agree that parents play an important role to make their children behave properly.
See you in class! please wake up!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hi there Debby :)>> CORRECT
OR> Hi Debby^^Sorry for waiting a lot.
>> Sorry for making you wait.I just work up and realized that I overslept today again.
>> I just woke up and I realized that I overslept today again. I set my alarm clock in my phone and dad phone as well.
>>I set my alarm clock in my phone and my dad\'s phone as well. But why didn\'t I wake up? It\'s weird! :\'(>> CORRECT
OR> How come I did not wake up? it\'s very strange!^^I really want to talk with you today especially about Kichen Nightmares that I saw.>> CORRECT
OR> I was looking forward to talk to you about the Kitchen Nightmare episode.Forgive me for being absent.>> CORRECT
OR> I apologize for being absent!I\'m going to see you tommorow intead.
>> I\'m going to see you tommorow instead.Take care.>> CORRECT
Or> Hove lots of care!^^<Essay>What child behavior is better or worse depends on parents I think.
>>Whether a child\'s behavior is better or worse, it depends on the parents I think. If they teach their child appropriately, kids\' behavior will be better.
>> CORRECT
OR> If children are taught properly, they will be better.Or not, their behavior will be worse.
>> CORRECT
Or> If not, it will get worst.
It\'s a simple matter.
>> CORRECT
OR> The idea is simple.
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