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Do you think that we are too dependent on computers? No, I don't. Because the computer is very useful in many fields. If there aren't computers, we can't do many things. For example, We can't use airplanes because computers indicate the ways of airplanes. And all factories will be stopped. Also fields of medicine are paralyzed. On this wise, we will be uncomportable. But there are problems that occur by computers. Some people are addicted in computer games. In these things, I think they are too dependent on conputers.They should overcome their problems. But, excepting games, I think computer may be use too much.

Hi Shelly^^ Thank you for sending me this. It  truly is a case of control to be dependent or independent from computers. The absence of it may cause more damage. It must be the decision of the user on how to use it properly. Keep your ideas flowing. Have a great day!^^ Take care^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: No, I don\'t. Because the computer is very useful in many fields. >> CORRECT OR> The computer is very efficient.If there aren\'t computers, we can\'t do many things. >> CORRECT OR> We can\'t do many things without computers.  For example, We can\'t use airplanes because computers indicate the ways of airplanes. >> CORRECT OR> For example, We can\'t use airplanes because computers indicate the route of airplanes. And all factories will be stopped. >> CORRECT OR> And all factories will close. Also fields of medicine are paralyzed. >> CORRECT OR> Medicine will be helpless.On this wise, we will be uncomportable. >> Otherwise, we will be uncomfortable. But there are problems that occur by computers. >> But there are problems that occur because of computers. Some people are addicted in computer games. >> CORRECT OR> Some people have an addiction to computer games. In these things, I think they are too dependent on conputers. >> CORRECT OR> With regards to this, the become dependent on computers.They should overcome their problems. >> CORRECT OR> They must face their problems.But, excepting games, I think computer may be use too much. >> But, exempting games, I think computers may be used too much.