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What religion do most Koreans practice in your country?
Buddhism is most popular religion in my country.
Many people believe Buddhism and it is common religion in my place.
But it doesn't popular in young people as much as elderly people.
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What religion do most Koreans practice in your country?Buddhism is most popular religion in my country.>> Buddhism is the most popular religion in my country.Many people believe Buddhism and it is common religion in my place.>> Many people believe in Buddhism and it is ca ommon religion in my place.But it doesn\'t popular in young people as much as elderly people.
>> But it is not popular among young people.
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