Homework

2014-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Oh, no! I should had a class but I couldn't get up early. When I got up, I checked a message that you were absent. It's too bad. I helped my parents yesterday. Although it was rainny but they reap red pappers so I couldn't just play alone. However it seem to be really difficult work to me. I feel the prick but I will can get up early tomorrow. See you. 1. He goes to school. Look, he is going to school! 2. He drinks a coffee. Look, he is drinking a coffee! 3. I swim every day. Look, I am swimming everyday! 4. She washes her hair. Look, she is washing her hair! 5. The cat always drinks its milk. Look, it is drinking its milk! 6. We dance in the living room. Look, we are dancing in the living room! 7. They run to church. Look, they are running to church! 8. You write a letter. Now, you are writing a letter. 9. Mother cooks in the kitchen. Right now, mother is cooking in the kitchen. 10. In the afternoon we watch TV. We are watching at the moment.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Anne!   Thanks for making your homework even though you weren\'t able to  attend today\'s class.^^ You seemed to be a good daughter because you helped your parents in harvesting red peppers instead of just playing. Don\'t worry about your absence in class because I understand. Let\'s just catch up tomorrow!   Take care and see you tomorrow!   ~Teacher Shanee     Oh, no! I should had a class but I couldn\'t get up early. >>> I should have had the class but I couldn\'t get up early. When I got up, I checked a message that you were absent. >>> When I got up, I received a message stating that I was absent. It\'s too bad. >>> Correct! I helped my parents yesterday. >>> Correct! Although it was rainny but they reap red pappers so I couldn\'t just play alone. >>> Altough it was raining, they harvested red peppers so I couldn\'t just play. However it seem to be really difficult work to me. >>> However, it seemed to be a very difficult work to me. I feel the prick but I will can get up early tomorrow. >>> I feel the prick but I will get up early tomorrow. See you. >>> Correct!1. He goes to school. Look, he is going to school! >>> Correct!2. He drinks a coffee. Look, he is drinking a coffee!>>> Correct! (drinking coffee)3. I swim every day. Look, I am swimming everyday!>>> Look, I am swimming.4. She washes her hair. Look, she is washing her hair!>>> Correct! 5. The cat always drinks its milk. Look, it is drinking its milk!>>> Correct!6. We dance in the living room. Look, we are dancing in the living room!>>> Correct!7. They run to church. Look, they are running to church!>>> Correct!8. You write a letter. Now, you are writing a letter.>>> Correct!9. Mother cooks in the kitchen. Right now, mother is cooking in the kitchen.>>> Correct!10. In the afternoon we watch TV. We are watching at the moment. >>> Correct!

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