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Hi there Debby :) You're right. My goal is also to speak fluently as native speakers. I always long for native speakers when I listen to their talks. But it's pretty hard and it will take a long time to be like a natie speaker. But I'm sure that I could be a native speaker as long as I pursue to learn English. Thanks for your good quote writing. See you later <Essay> It's so difficult for a smoker to stop smoking actually. I have been thinking that if they know that the smoking is bad, they will stop smoking. In fact, I haven't seen any person to stop smoking at least around me. I hope that they won't smoke any more. It's bad to them and even to other people that don't smoke.

Hi there [이름]^^ Thank you so much for sending this. In my country, they made a high tax for cigarettes and this year 30% of the smokers lessened their smoking!^^ But then the sales of some companies have also decreased. Everything happens for a reason I guess. One main reason I think that smoking is a problem is that people fail to admit that it is a bad habit. They make excuses that it helps them with stress. Thank you for your ideas. Keep it coming!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hi there Debby :)>> CORRECTYou\'re right. >> CORRECT OR> I agree with you. My goal is also to speak fluently as native speakers. >> My goal is also to speak fluently as a native speakers. I always long for native speakers when I listen to their talks. >> I always long for native speakers when I listen to their talks.  But it\'s pretty hard and it will take a long time to be like a natie speaker. >> But it\'s pretty hard and it will take a long time to be like a native speaker But I\'m sure that I could be a native speaker as long as I pursue to learn English.>> But I\'m sure that I could be a native speaker as long as I pursue learning English.Thanks for your good quote writing.>> Thanks for writing a good quote .See you later. >> CORRECT OR> See you soon.<Essay>It\'s so difficult for a smoker to stop smoking actually. >> It\'s so difficult for a smoker to actually stop smoking. I have been thinking that if they know that the smoking is bad, they will stop smoking. >> CORRECT OR> I have been considering that if they are aware that smoking is bad, they will stop the habit. In fact, I haven\'t seen any person to stop smoking at least around me. >> In fact, I haven\'t seen any person around me stop smoking. I hope that they won\'t smoke any more. >> CORRECT OR> I hope that they stop smoking for good. It\'s bad to them and even to other people that don\'t smoke. >>  It\'s bad for them and even to other people that don\'t smoke.