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Hi Debby^^ I didn't do homework yesterday, So, I will write homework of two topics today.^^ 1. Do you think that child behavior is better or worse than it was years ago? I think the child behavior is worse and worse than it was years ago. In korea, there is a lot of juvenile delinquency. In the school, some kids harass someone. And, some children run away from home. I have worked for academy for elementary school. At that time I was very surprised because almost children use the swear word when they spoke. I think the children can contact bad things on the computer or smart phone, As the social evolution is progressed, it is easier to contact them. 2. What would be the best suggestion to a person to stop smoking? I will suggest that you have to find the other habit to a person who wants to stop smoking. I think smoking is one kind of habits. So If a smoking person has a different good habit like exercise, it seems to be easy to stop smoking. But, the most important thing is a strong will. If the person has a strong will, he or she will be able to succeed.

Hi Shelly^^ Thank you so much for sending this. In my country, they made a high tax for cigarettes and this year 30% of the smokers lessened their smoking!^^ But then the sales of some companies have also decreased. Everything happens for a reason I guess. One main reason I think that smoking is a problem is that people fail to admit that it is a bad habit. They make excuses that it helps them with stress. Thank you for your ideas. Keep it coming!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hi Debby^^ I didn\'t do homework yesterday, So, I will write homework of two topics today.^^>> CORRECT OR> I didn\'t do homework yesterday, So, I will write two topics for homework today.^^1. Do you think that child behavior is better or worse than it was years ago?>> CORRECTI think the child behavior is worse and worse than it was years ago. >> I think the child behavior is getting worse and worse than it was years ago. In korea, there is a lot of juvenile delinquency. >>  In Korea, there is a lot of juvenile delinquencies. In the school, some kids harass someone. >> CORRECT OR> Some kids are bullies.And, some children run away from home. >> CORRECT OR> Some kids even run away from their home.I have worked for academy for elementary school. >> I have worked for an academy for an elementary school. At that time I was very surprised because almost children use the swear word when they spoke. >>  At that time I was very surprised because almost all children use the swear word when they spoke. I think the children can contact bad things on the computer or smart phone, >>  I think the children can contact with bad things on the computer or a smart phone. As the social evolution is progressed, it is easier to contact them.>> As the social evolution is progressing, it is easier to contact them.2. What would be the best suggestion to a person to stop smoking?>> CORRECT I will suggest that you have to find the other habit to a person who wants to stop smoking. >> I will suggest that you have to find the other habits of a person who wants to stop smoking.  I think smoking is one kind of habits. >> I think smoking is one kind of a habit. So If a smoking person has a different good habit like exercise, it seems to be easy to stop smoking. >> So If a smoking person has a different good habit like exercise, it seems easier to stop smoking. But, the most important thing is a strong will. >> CORRECT OR> But, the most essential is a strong will. If the person has a strong will, he or she will be able to succeed. >> CORRECT OR> I think that they will succeed if they have determination.