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Would you like to be famous? Why or why not? Cite some examples.
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Through my fame, If I will be able to earn lots of money, I\'d like to be a celebrity.
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However, if it\'s not related to money, I don\'t want to be it.
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Famous means a noise to me.
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If possible, I\'d like to live quiet life.
>>If possible, I\'d like to live a peaceful life.
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