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2014-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Would you like to be famous? Why or why not? Cite some examples. ****************************** Through my fame, If I will be able to earn lots of money, I'd like to be a celebrity. However, if it's not related to money, I don't want to be it. Famous means a noise to me. If possible, I'd like to live quiet life.

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Sir [이름]!!

Good evening!

T[이름]k you so much for once again doing your homework, and I am so impressed with your answer...^^
I just want you my dear Sir [이름] to keep up the good work...

Take care and have a good night..

Talk to you later my dear...

xoxoTeacher cam^^

Would you like to be famous? Why or why not? Cite some examples.
******************************
Through my fame, If I will be able to earn lots of money, I\'d like to be a celebrity.

>>correct
 However, if it\'s not related to money, I don\'t want to be it.

>>correct
 Famous means a noise to me.

>>correct
 If possible, I\'d like to live quiet life.

>>If possible, I\'d like to live a peaceful life.


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