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Hello Debby :) I got a sleep during the day. As the time is closer to the end of the vacation, my body wants to get more sleep for a rest. Why is the time so fast like this? I can't believe 2 months more are already gone. But I'm looking forward to see a next day. Really. :D Take care and see you. <Essay> I don't think so. Music is just a melody. We can enjoy music even without lyrics. After choosing music with a meloday, we find lyrics for a deep understanding. But the understanding doesn't mean that we've got to do like that. A person who choose to behave bad like some lyrics hasn't a right mind.

Hi [이름]!^^ Time flies we are getting old!^^ Thanks for this very open minded answer!^^ I appreciate that you take your opinions from reality. It is true that each person would have a preference for music but it\'s up to us to be responsible about what we hear or adapt to. Children follow anything that is in trend so it is a must to be careful with things that we show them.^^ Good job [이름]!^^ Take care^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hello Debby :)>> CORRECT I got a sleep during the day. >> I got some sleep during the day. As the time is closer to the end of the vacation, my body wants to get more sleep for a rest. >> CORRECT OR> As vacation feels like it\'s ending, I have cravings to sleep a lot. Why is the time so fast like this? >> CORRECT OR> Why does time fly?I can\'t believe 2 months more are already gone. >> CORRECT OR> I have never noticed that it has already been two months.But I\'m looking forward to see a next day. Really. :D >> But I\'m looking forward to see the next day. Really. :DTake care and see you. >> CORRECT OR> See you later alligator!^^haha<Essay>I don\'t think so. >> CORRECT OR> I do not agree.Music is just a melody. >> CORRECT OR> Music is a form of a melody.We can enjoy music even without lyrics. >> CORRECT OR> It is possible to enjoy it even without lyrics.  After choosing music with a meloday, we find lyrics for a deep understanding. >> After choosing music with a melody, we find lyrics for a deep understanding. But the understanding doesn\'t mean that we\'ve got to do like that. >> But the understanding doesn\'t mean that we\'ve got to do it like that. A person who choose to behave bad like some lyrics hasn\'t a right mind. >> A person who chooses to behave bad like some lyrics hasn\'t a right mind.