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Do you agree that some music lyrics promote violence? Yes, I agree. Some music lyrics are very violent such as black music or hip hop. There are a lot of abuse and violent words and in them. Of course they always contain bad things but they "can" promote violence. Nowdays we can contact easily these music even though little children can do. If immature children or adults listen them, it can cause some problem. Besides, some girl or boy bands music that children like sometimes contain bad things such as sexual things or violence. It is easier for children to contact them. Also, the children like idol groups, they want to resemble these singers. So some music lyrics and singers' attitudes are very important.

Hi Shelly Thanks for this very open minded answer!^^ I appreciate that you take your opinions from reality. It is true that each person would have a preference for music but it\'s up to us to be responsible about what we hear or adapt to. Children follow anything that is in trend so it is a must to be careful with things that we show them.^^ Good job Sam!^^ Take care^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Do you agree that some music lyrics promote violence? >> CORRECTYes, I agree. >> CORRECT OR> I go with that idea.Some music lyrics are very violent such as black music or hip hop. >> CORRECT OR> Other kinds of music like black music or hip hop.can be violent. There are a lot of abuse and violent words and in them. >> There are a lot of abuse and violent words in them. Of course they always contain bad things but they \"can\" promote violence. >> CORRECT OR> They have bad contents and it can promote violence.Nowdays we can contact easily these music even though little children can do. >> Nowdays we can easily contact these music even though little children can do it. If immature children or adults listen them, it can cause some problem. >>  If immature children or adults listen them, it can cause some problems. Besides, some girl or boy bands music that children like sometimes contain bad things such as sexual things or violence. >> CORRECT OR> Sometimes, some girl or boy bands music that children watch has bad contents such as sexual things or violence. It is easier for children to contact them. >> CORRECT OR> Children can easily catch it.Also, the children like idol groups, they want to resemble these singers. >> CORRECT OR> Also, the children like idol groups, they want to copy these singers.  So some music lyrics and singers\' attitudes are very important. >> CORRECT >> So some music lyrics and singers\' behaviour are very important.