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2014-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I will violate the law for a loved one if the sorrow ocurred when i observe the law is smaller than the happiness ocurred when i don't observe the law. Violating the law is actually very difficult desicion. However, I think i can violate the law for a really loved one like my family. Because my life can be happy with a loved one. Though, if the loved one's actions and thoughts were wrong ethically, i would not violate the law because i hope him to live well.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! As they say, love knows no bounds. I think you believe in this, that\'s why you are willing to break the law to save a loved one. I guess I do, too. I am willing to do such thing but I hope I won\'t reach that point. Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^I will violate the law for a loved one if the sorrow ocurred when i observe the law is smaller than the happiness ocurred when i don\'t observe the law.>> I will violate the law for a loved one if the benefits of observing the law are lesser than the happiness in breaking it.  Violating the law is actually very difficult desicion.>> Violating the law is actually a very difficult decision. However, I think i can violate the law for a really loved one like my family.>> Correct Because my life can be happy with a loved one.>> Correct Though, if the loved one\'s actions and thoughts were wrong ethically, i would not violate the law because I hope him to live well. >> Correct

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