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Do you think "free speech" should have limitations?
This topic is too difficult. First I agree about that. Of course it must be free. But I think there are somr limitations in free speech. In Korea, if some problems in goverment occur, some major portal sites bolck the articles but not always. Also, it may be people's guess. But I can't believe anymore whenever proofs about that come out. I think the goverment needs to be honest for us.
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Hi there Shelly^^
\"FREE SPEECH\" means the freedom to say anything anywhere, to anybody anyhow. It\'s
the freedom to speak your mind. A lot of people say that it is our right but downright
honesty can be rude or hurtful sometimes. I do believe in freedom of speech but I think
that speaking manners are more important!^^
Enjoy your trip!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Do you think \"free speech\" should have limitations?
>> CORRECT
Or> Do you think \"Free Speech\" should have limitations?This topic is too difficult.
>> CORRECT
OR> The topic is challenging. First I agree about that.
>> CORRECT
OR> I do agree on that.Of course it must be free.
>> CORRECT
OR> It should have freedom.But I think there are somr limitations in free speech.
>> But I think there are some limitations in free speech.
In Korea, if some problems in goverment occur, some major portal sites bolck the articles but not always.
>> In Korea, if some problems in the Goverment occur, some major portal sites block the articles but not always.
Also, it may be people\'s guess.
>> CORRECT
OR> It might aso be the guess of the people.But I can\'t believe anymore whenever proofs about that come out.
>> CORRECT
OR> I don\'t really believe in it even with the evidence.I think the goverment needs to be honest for us.
>> CORRECT
OR> I think the government should show honesty.
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