homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ teacher Debby!!*^^*
There are Filipino singer conversation today.
The old days I heard something the song.
The song was NINA- LOVE MOVES IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS. I think very sweet song.
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I think to draw. A person that drawing is so charming.
A figure that represent their though is not easy.
The expression also be good to draw a good picture as well as.
I have seen great art people because I don't know art and don't make art.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]^^
Yes I know Nina! She is famous in our country!^^
That song is one of her best songs. WoW! it\'s good that you like her.
I like her song \"steep\".
Usually her songs have a piano melody or the guitar.
I\'m glad you like her!^^
Great answers today [이름]!^^
Take care^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hi~ teacher Debby!!*^^*
>> CORRECT
OR> Hello teacher Debby^^There are Filipino singer conversation today.
>> There is a Filipino singer in the conversation today.
The old days I heard something the song.
>> In the past days, I heard a song. The song was NINA- LOVE MOVES IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS. I think very sweet song.>> CORRECT
OR> The song title was LOVE MOVES IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS by NINA, and I think that it is a sweet song.<homework>I think to draw.
>> CORRECT
OR> I think that it is drawing.
A person that drawing is so charming.
>> A person that can draw is so charming.
OR> I find people who can draw charming.A figure that represent their though is not easy.
>> A figure that represents their thoughts is not easy.
The expression also be good to draw a good picture as well as.
>>It is also good to draw a good picture as an expression.I have seen great art people because I don\'t know art and don\'t make art.
>> I have seen great artists because I don\'t know art and don\'t make art.
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