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2014-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi~ teacher Debby!!*^^* There are Filipino singer conversation today. The old days I heard something the song. The song was NINA- LOVE MOVES IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS. I think very sweet song. <homework> I think to draw. A person that drawing is so charming. A figure that represent their though is not easy. The expression also be good to draw a good picture as well as. I have seen great art people because I don't know art and don't make art.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^ Yes I know Nina! She is famous in our country!^^ That song is one of her best songs. WoW! it\'s good that you like her. I like her song \"steep\". Usually her songs have a piano melody or the guitar. I\'m glad you like her!^^ Great answers today [이름]!^^ Take care^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hi~ teacher Debby!!*^^* >> CORRECT OR> Hello teacher Debby^^There are Filipino singer conversation today. >> There is a Filipino singer in the conversation today. The old days I heard something the song. >> In the past days, I heard a song. The song was NINA- LOVE MOVES IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS. I think very sweet song.>> CORRECT OR> The song title was LOVE MOVES IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS by NINA, and I think that it is a sweet song.<homework>I think to draw. >> CORRECT OR> I think that it is drawing.  A person that drawing is so charming. >> A person that can draw is so charming. OR> I find people who can draw charming.A figure that represent their though is not easy. >> A figure that represents their thoughts is not easy. The expression also be good to draw a good picture as well as. >>It is also good to draw a good picture as an expression.I have seen great art people because I don\'t know art and don\'t make art. >> I have seen great artists because I don\'t know art and don\'t make art.

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