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Good evening Mr. [이름]^^
Thanks for doing this and I appreciate it.
I have already checked your answers here and
I can say that you did well.
Have time to check some of my correction here.
I am happy to hear that you enjoying talking English in our company^^
Thanks again and have a great day ahead^^
Teacher Myra
What do you enjoy most in studying English?
First, I enjoy talking in English on the phone via Power English.
>> Correct
>> OR: First, I enjoy talking in English on the phone through Power English.
Because it\'s hard to take the chance to talk with foreigner in English except for class.
>> Because it\'s difficult to have a chance to talk with foreigner in English except in our class.
Second, I enjoy listening to Arirang Radio on my mobile phone while commuting.
>> Correct.
>> Second, I enjoy listening to Arirang Radio on my mobile phone while I am taking the subway or the bus.
Currently it\'s difficult to understand 100% what they talk but I try to do it and it\'s interested.
>>Currently it\'s difficult to understand 100% what they talk but I am trying to do it and because I am interested in it.
>> OR YOU CAN SAY: For now it is not easy to understand totally what they are saying but I am doing my
best to do it because it is interesting.
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