Homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Chloe.
Please check out my homework.
I would spend my weekend with my friends rather than family.
This is actually a very hard choice because I like to spend time with both my friends and family.
The reason I chose to spend a weekend with my friends is because I have a lot of things in common with my friends.
We like to go for shopping, hanging out in cafe, and going to concerts or music festivals.
Also, we can casually talk many things like a dating and work.
Thank you for reading my homework. Good night, Chloe :)
강사 첨삭
To me, I would rather spend time with my family. I love my family and I trust them fully. I don\'t think I can honestly say I feel that way about any of my friends. Sometimes, friends can be two-faced. It means, they can be back stabbers. I know my family would never do anything like that to me. My mother always told me when I was a teenager and when I was having problems with my friends that the only people you can truely trust is your family. But, I know that you have trusted friends. So, nurture your relationship with them.
-Teacher Chloe
Hello, Chloe. >>Hello Chloe! Please check out my homework.>>Correct!
>>Please check my homework. I would spend my weekend with my friends rather than family.>>I would spend my weekend with my friends rather than my family. This is actually a very hard choice because I like to spend time with both my friends and family.>>This is actually a very hard decision to make because I like spending time both with family and friends. The reason I chose to spend a weekend with my friends is because I have a lot of things in common with my friends.>>The reason I chose to spend a weekend with my friends is that because I have a lot of things in common with my friends.We like to go for shopping, hanging out in cafe, and going to concerts or music festivals.>>We like hanging out together. We like going shopping, seeing concerts and music festivals.Also, we can casually talk many things like a dating and work.>>We usually talk about many things such as work and dating. Thank you for reading my homework.
>>Correct!
Good night, Chloe :)
>>Good night Chloe!
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