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What do you think are the best ways to help poor people?
How can poverty be solved in your country?
I think the best way to help poor people is motivating them to overcome their poverty.
But it is very hard in reality.
So we need to give them some money for they can live.
Actually in my country, government gives a huge amount of money for poor people.
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What do you think are the best ways to help poor people? How can poverty be solved in your country?I think the best way to help poor people is motivating them to overcome their poverty.>> I think that the best way to help poor people is by motivating them to improve their situation.But it is very hard in reality.>> Correct.So we need to give them some money for they can live.>>So we need to give them some money so they can survive.Actually in my country, government gives a huge amount of money for poor people.
>>Actually in my country, the government gives a huge amount of money to poor people.
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