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What do you do to encourage yourself when going through hard times?
When I go through hardship, I always think my family, notably my kids to encourage myself because my family and kids are all I have.
And I hypnotize myself that I can do it, I can do it...
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It\'s the second day of the week. I hope you\'re doing great :))
Stay happy and see you tomorrow! :))
__T.Myra__(\")(^^)
When I go through hardship, I always think my family, notably my kids to encourage myself because my family and kids are all I have.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>>>Whenever I go through hardships in life, I always think my family, notably my kids, to encourage myself because my family is all I have.
And I hypnotize myself that I can do it, I can do it...
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> And I keep in my mind that I can do everything.
It\'s the second day of the week. I hope you\'re doing great :))
Stay happy and see you tomorrow! :))
__T.Myra__(\")(^^)
When I go through hardship, I always think my family, notably my kids to encourage myself because my family and kids are all I have.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>>>Whenever I go through hardships in life, I always think my family, notably my kids, to encourage myself because my family is all I have.
And I hypnotize myself that I can do it, I can do it...
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> And I keep in my mind that I can do everything.
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