homework

2014-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Borrow or lend? Choose the correct word. 1) Could you lend me some money, please? 2) Some pupils can borrow books from their school. 3) Will you lend me your umbrella till tomorrow? 4) Should I borrow him my football? 5) You may borrow my bike, but be careful. 6) Could I borrow your cup? 7) You can lend your book to Steve. 8) Why do students borrow so much money from their parents? 9) Peter won't lend his car to anyone. 10) Will your mother lend you some money? It's sunny and hot today. How are you? There are a lot of classes in the cultural center in my town. It's free and good system. I apply for Pilates class but I can't join it because applicants are very much. On the other hand, my husband apply for drawing class and he is enable to participate it from today. I envied him but he said to me I can go there instead of him. I am concerning about that. Although is is exercising class, I like to learn anything. I will tell you the result next morning. Thank you. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, my dear Anne!

 

Take advantage of that opportunity to learn something.

I am really bad at drawing so I really want to learn. However, I got no time to do so and there is no free class offered in my place.

So you are very lucky because you were given that chance. I hope that you\'ll enjoy it! I am looking forward to your stories tomorrow.

 

See yah!

 

~Teacher Shanee

 

Borrow or lend? Choose the correct word.

1) Could you lend me some money, please?

>>> Correct!
2) Some pupils can borrow books from their school.

>>> Correct!
3) Will you lend me your umbrella till tomorrow?

>>> Correct!
4) Should I borrow him my football?

>>> Should I lend him my football?

5) You may borrow my bike, but be careful.

>>> Correct!
6) Could I borrow your cup?

>>> Correct!
7) You can lend your book to Steve.

>>> Correct!
8) Why do students borrow so much money from their parents?

>>> Correct!
9) Peter won\'t lend his car to anyone.

>>> Correct!
10) Will your mother lend you some money?

>>> Correct!

It\'s sunny and hot today.

>>> Correct!

How are you?

>>> Correct!

There are a lot of classes in the cultural center in my town.

>>> Correct!
It\'s free and good system.

>>> They are free and have good systems.

I apply for Pilates class but I can\'t join it because applicants are very much.

>>> I applied for the Pilates class bit I couldn\'t join it because there a lot of applicants.

On the other hand, my husband apply for drawing class and he is enable to participate it from today.

>>> On the other hand, my husband applied for the drawing class and he is going to start to attend the class today.

I envied him but he said to me I can go there instead of him.

>>> Correct!

I am concerning about that.

>>> I am concern about that.

Although is is exercising class, I like to learn anything.

>>> Although, it is just a exercising class, I like to learn anything.

I will tell you the result next morning.

>>> I will tell you the result tomorrow morning.

Thank you.

>>> Correct!

Bye.

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