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2014-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1-e 2-h 3-f 4-g 5-c 6-b 7-a 8-d We had opening ceremony today. I'm so happy to meet my friends. WE played soccer and group game. We also cleaned and picked up the trash.

강사 첨삭

Good day Tom^^ Wow! I am sure that you had a wonderful time with your friends.What game did you play? Can you tell me about it later in class? You are really conscious about our environment. Keep it up. I hope that all young boys and girls like you do the same. Please go over the lapses that you had today. If you have any questions, feel free to tell it in class. Can\'t wait for our class.Teacher Nina   1-e >> CORRECT! 2-h >> CORRECT! 3-f >> B4-g >> CORRECT! 5-c >> CORRECT! 6-b >> F7-a >> CORRECT! 8-d >> CORRECT! We had opening ceremony today. >> We had an opening ceremony today. I\'m so happy to meet my friends. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I was so happy to meet my friends.WE played soccer and group game. >> We played soccer and a group game. We also cleaned and picked up the trash. >> CORRECT!

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